Essence of BloodLust

Great story going and dont give up because of what people are saying. My grammar and spelling are so bad! i had to delete one of my stories because this ...

Really good. I liked it. I found it strange how at the beginning your dialogue wasn't correct but then it was at the end. A soft knock at the door ...

“Ravyn we need to talk.” Misaki said to him slowly.

Great attention getter! Your way with words and plot that sets the mood of the story are great and make me want to read more! Definatly got me hooked, and ...

OKay, I Love the whole plot of this and think that your wording was great. Some of your grammar may be a bit off but dont worry because every reveiw ...

Hi, Zayna! Nice to meet you! It's nice to have a nice, new member here at YWS. Be sure to read the rules in the about section at the top ...

Today was the day. I could feel all of the anxiety that had been building over the past few weeks bearing down on me. My lungs seemed to be devoid ...

I think that you put alot of thought and effort into this and that you have great talent. I enjoyed it but like others have said, the lyrics in my ...

That was absolutely wonderful! I felt like it was really straight out of a Ouran novel! And the story plot involving the thunderstorm and Tamaki's need to protect her no ...

beautiful writing but it could have been more personal. I dont feel like you got their personalities across completly. But it was a good fanfic all in all. Keep writing!

Hello, my name is Zayna and i'm 13. I have had a passion for writing fictional stories for as long as i can remember and I'm looking for some critque ...